Draft #2 "What We Do and Don’t Know about the Link between Air Pollution and Coronavirus” Summary
In the article,
"What We Do and Don’t Know about the Link between Air Pollution and
Coronavirus”, Lewis (2020) has stated that there are possible correlations
between coronavirus and air pollution. By using accessible and reliable global
data on air pollution, Lewis claimed that air pollution worsens existing health
conditions like “strokes, heart disease, respiratory illness and more” which
increases the mortality rate of COVID-19. For example, Lewis mentioned that it
makes sense for the virus to spread around rapidly in densely populated cities
like New York and London where there are huge global travel connections.
However, Lewis believes that poverty and deprivation are other considerations
leading to the underlying health conditions. Although it is difficult to find
more correlations as the spread of COVID-19 has yet to complete, Lewis stated
that this air pollution-COVID-19 correlation has brought hope to lessen the
effects of the coronavirus.
I agree with Lewis
that air pollution may have a certain correlation with coronavirus. However,
the article fails to address the public's concern about coronavirus due to the
lack of information on other reliable factors that affect the spread of the
virus.
One of the factors
that the public should be aware of is the relation of atmospheric temperature
with COVID-19. As the environmental temperature rises, the ability of the virus
to spread around decreases. According to Woodward(2020), the World Health
Organization(WHO) has done a study on R naught and environmental temperature
where the R naught represents the average number of people that have no
immunity to the virus and has been infected. Woodward also mentioned that
" for every 1.8-degree Fahrenheit increase in temperature and 1% increase
in relative humidity, the coronavirus' R naught value decreased by 0.04 and
0.02". While the virus is currently still active and contagious, it is
best to avoid interacting with one another especially during the cold
weather.
Another factor that the public should be aware of is the need for social distancing. As the coronavirus spreads through human to human contact, separating people and disrupting the transmission is one of the ways to reduce the spread of COVID-19. Pearce, K. (2020, March 13) stated that the use of social distancing is to lessen the interaction between people as "diseases transmitted by respiratory droplets require a certain proximity of people". Pearce also states that social distancing is used when there is a community transmission but the interconnection is unsure. Therefore, the lack of social distancing is a factor that contributes to the spread of COVID-19.
Lastly, tourist
activities are also a factor aiding the spread of the virus. Back when the virus
was first discovered, country borders were still open and tourist activities
were on-going. This led to the spread of the virus from Wuhan, China to other
countries including Thailand. According to Tantrakarnapa, K. (2020, June 18), "The first
infected female case was officially reported in Bangkok, a capital city of
Thailand, her nationality is Chinese. She migrated from China to Thailand as a
tourist. All first 15 infected cases in Thailand were a Chinese nationality and
was detected from 12 January to 31 January, it was 19 days for spreading from 1
to 15 cases." As the tourists and commuters of Thailand were in close
proximity to one another, the chances of virus transmission are high. This has
caused the spread to increase rapidly until the number of cases hit 200 on 21st
March 2020. This shows that there is a strong correlation of tourist factor to
the number of COVID-19 cases.
As Lewis mentioned in
his article, air pollution is not the only contributing factor for the spread
of the coronavirus. Factors like atmospheric temperature, social distancing,
and tourist activities will either aid or minimize the spread of the virus. If
these factors are considered and measures are taken correctly by the public,
the spread of the virus will soon end.
References
Lewis, A. (2020, May 12). What
we do and don’t know about the links between air pollution and coronavirus.
The Conversation.
https://theconversation.com/what-we-do-and-dont-know-about-the-links-between-air-pollution-and-coronavirus-137746
Woodward, A. (2020, March 18). High
temperatures and muggy weather might make the new coronavirus less contagious,
a group of experts says. Business Insider.
https://www.businessinsider.in/science/news/high-temperatures-and-muggy-weather-might-make-the-new-coronavirus-less-contagious-a-group-of-experts-says/articleshow/74697538.cms
Pearce, K. (2020, March 13). What is social
distancing and how can it slow the spread of COVID-19? The Hub.
https://hub.jhu.edu/2020/03/13/what-is-social-distancing/
Tantrakarnapa, K. (2020, June 18). Influencing
factors of COVID-19 spreading: a case study of Thailand. Journal of Public
Health. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10389-020-01329-5?error=cookies_not_supported&code=b8902c5f-3b44-4eb1-befa-9f67d79c160d
Dear JunYing,
ReplyDeleteThere is a good use of reporting verbs in your article. You also quoted words to avoid paraphrasing.
However, more examples could be given without the use of reporting verbs.
For your thesis, the stand and controlling idea are stated clearly. But your sentence "While I agree with Lewis that air pollution may have a certain correlation with COVID-19." should end with a comma, and not a full stop, as the sentence is not complete.
Regards,
Sebastian
Dear Sebastian,
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time to read my summary. I have made the necessary changes that you have mentioned and it was of great help for my grades, thank you so much!
Best regards,
Junying